i have started with the figure, with mixed results. main problem is with the face. it's just....its not apathetic. it just looks strange.

this is the revised version of the face. don't look at the blue. the blue was a pre-revised sketch, so just look at the greylead. mail me with improvements, esp. on the face!!!
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PS: don't be nit picky, i'm not submitting something into deviantart, i just need a general sketch. im going to tablet this into ps anyway, so it's fine. i know about the tie, collar, and hair on the back of the neck, i just needed to put the face into a relative context (ed: why am i trying to explain myself!)